http://shineeshipper08.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shineeshipper08.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kumo_is_kumo 2014-09-01 08:38 am (UTC)

This was such a cute and simple story XD, adorable.
However there are a few grammar errors and such, but I'm sure with a bit more practice those will pass XD. Also, just a little note, "blouse" is usually used for female shirts, not male ones XD, just keep that in mind when writing I suppose.
Otherwise, this fic was really adorable and fluffy XD.
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